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2013海淀一模英语试卷点评及解析(10)

2013-04-10 17:33 来源:【郑州教育网 对此文章感兴趣的有:

        写作部门题目设置均简单,情景作文中的乘车出行、发现物品丢失、询问、归还、感谢等情节都曾经频繁被考到,书写难度不大,但是想要写好必须具体两个能力:1好词好句的储备;2细腻细节的饱满支撑和巧妙扩展的精彩丰富。开放式作文虽然本次立意比较新颖,但立意的寻找难度较以往大大降低,基本不会出现看不出来、全跑题或半跑题现象,甚至连多个立意的可能性都很小,立意范围相对比较统一,大大降低了写作难度,总之本次一模的写作不难,下面两篇范文为新东方优能中学教师在考试现场30分钟完成的作文原稿,供同学们参考。

  情景作文
  To free from school burdens and working stress, I, together with my foreign teacher Tim intended a weekend trip to People’s Park last Saturday. Considering that it was not on the work day, I suggested going by taxi would be relatively faster and more convenient and comfortable, which is superior to taking subway and buses. Luckily, we met an available taxi and a nice male driver.

  Arriving at the park, Tim found his camera missing. Having searched the back-pack inside out, I decided that it must have been left in the car driving us here. Calmly and smartly, I got contact with the car company. I concisely informed them the whole process as well as where we were, then waiting at the park gate with Tim, who this time was not so anxious and depressed as before.

  As I expected, it didn’t take long before the driver sent the camera back. He insisted that we check the camera and told us to be more careful next time. We expressed our super appreciation and gratitude to him. What an interesting day and what a nice taxi driver!

  开放作文
  Hi, Jim. I think the picture is trying to tell that we see different things from different angels and different positions.

  As is vividly portrayed, facing the same number, the girl, who is looking upside down, figures out the No. 6 while the boy, who is eyeing downside up, is insisting that it is the No. 9. What a couple of na?ve and lovely children!

  But basically and honestly speaking, phenomenon of this kind is not rare in our contemporary society. Seeing or thinking from different angels or different positions rolls out different result, which may sometimes cause disagreement or even worse the conflict, quarrel, disbelief. All these are not good for harmony-making and harmony-keeping.

  Accordingly, when conflict and disagreement arise, we need learn to shift our position and angel, look flexibly around and work out all possibilities. Only in this approach will we interact harmoniously.


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